Monday, January 9, 2012
A longer poem - not happy with it but what do you think?
Why are you not happy with it? I liked it and often I criticise alot of peoples work. Also long poems sometimes get boring becuase it starts of great and then the writer just gets lazy and waffles on but yours kept its structure and kept the hook.
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